求英语大神看看,这篇文章有没有什么错误~Our English teacher not only teaches us English ,but also smoe manner in class.For example if you are late,you should go to the back door and say,"I'm sorry ,I'm late,may I come in?"You can ente

求英语大神看看,这篇文章有没有什么错误~Our English teacher not only teaches us English ,but also smoe manner in class.For example if you are late,you should go to the back door and say,"I'm sorry ,I'm late,may I come in?"You can ente
求英语大神看看,这篇文章有没有什么错误~
Our English teacher not only teaches us English ,but also smoe manner in class.For example if you are late,you should go to the back door and say,"I'm sorry ,I'm late,may I come in?"You can enter the classroom when teacher says "yes" And if you can't answer the qusetions asked by teacher ,You should stand up and say."I'am sorry ,I don't know." I think these manners are very important for us .Because they are enable us to get along well with others.
Qusetion:
What would you do if you are late?

求英语大神看看,这篇文章有没有什么错误~Our English teacher not only teaches us English ,but also smoe manner in class.For example if you are late,you should go to the back door and say,"I'm sorry ,I'm late,may I come in?"You can ente
我不是英语大神.
第一,not only but also前后应当成分一致.把not only放在teaches后面妥当.
第二,be important for sb后面往往跟to do表示某事对某人的重要性.此处文意应该是要表达manners(礼貌、规矩)对人很重要,important后面应当接to.
第三,because在书面中只有连词用法,连词不可以单独引导句子,故应与前句打通.
第四,enable是及物动词,后面直接引导就可以,前面不能加上系动词are.en是一种动词前缀.
希望能帮到您.

写得不错。加括号处为修改建议：
Our English teacher not only teaches us English, but also [helps us with our manners] in class. For example, if you are late, you should go to the back door and say "I'm sorry, I'm...

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写得不错。加括号处为修改建议：
Our English teacher not only teaches us English, but also [helps us with our manners] in class. For example, if you are late, you should go to the back door and say "I'm sorry, I'm late. May I come in?" You can enter the classroom when [the] teacher says "yes". [Here is another example:] if you [can't] answer the qusetions asked by [the] teacher, you should stand up and say "I'am sorry, I don't know." I think these manners are very important for us because they [help] us to get along well with others.
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are enable 这里错了。 they enable us to get along well ...