一句话求鉴定对错,i spend my some time to visit with some winners often about their unforgetable things and learning experience

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一句话求鉴定对错,i spend my some time to visit with some winners often about their unforgetable things and learning experience

一句话求鉴定对错,i spend my some time to visit with some winners often about their unforgetable things and learning experience
一句话求鉴定对错,
i spend my some time to visit with some winners often about their unforgetable things and learning experience

一句话求鉴定对错,i spend my some time to visit with some winners often about their unforgetable things and learning experience
这句话有好几个地方表达不当,分别为:
1、often的位置;
2、spend (time) doing,花时间做某事;
3、visit是及物动词,不用介词with,但建议改为interview(采访),介词about改为for;
整句修改:I often spend some time interviewing some winners for their unforgetable things and learning experience.

i spend 【去掉my】 some time 【to visit :spend sometime on sth./ in doing sth., 所以改成 in visiting】 【去掉with】 some winners often 【about改成 on】 their unforgetable things and learning experience
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i spend 【去掉my】 some time 【to visit :spend sometime on sth./ in doing sth., 所以改成 in visiting】 【去掉with】 some winners often 【about改成 on】 their unforgetable things and learning experience
整理一下:
i spend some time in visiting some winners often on their unforgetable things and learning experience

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I spend some time to visit the winners, and ask them about their unforgettable things and learning experience.