英语作文请求点评My English learningI starded to learn English in Grade 6.I usually learn English by reciting and writing articles .I also have some trouble in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.Besides,I often watch English mov

英语作文请求点评My English learningI starded to learn English in Grade 6.I usually learn English by reciting and writing articles .I also have some trouble in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.Besides,I often watch English mov
英语作文请求点评
My English learning
I starded to learn English in Grade 6.I usually learn English by reciting and writing articles .I also have some trouble in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.Besides,I often watch English movies.And now I begin to listen to English radio programs.They are helpful.Of course,I can't avoid making mistakes as others learning English.For example,I often speak and write the Chinese English.I have a dream that I can speak English fluently as a native speaker one day.I believed it will come true.
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英语作文请求点评My English learningI starded to learn English in Grade 6.I usually learn English by reciting and writing articles .I also have some trouble in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.Besides,I often watch English mov
以下是你的错误：
1.(starded) to learn English in Grade 6
正确：started
2.And now I begin to listen to English radio (programs)
正确：programmes
3.I also have some (trouble) in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
正确：troubles
4.I (believed) it will come true.
正确：believe
5.I also have some trouble in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
建议：In the process of learning English,I met some obstacles such as from the aspects of vocabulary and listening.
6.They are helpful.
建议：They are indeed helpful to me.
7.Of course,I can't avoid making mistakes as others learning English.
建议:of course,I can't avoid making mistakes as learning a foreign language is a really tough for me.
8.For example,I often speak and write the Chinese English.
建议：For example,I often translate Chinese directly into English without considering the grammatical error.
9.I have a dream that I can speak English fluently as a native speaker one day.I believed it will come true.
建议:I wish I could master this language in the future.