请帮我修改一篇英语作文The Feeling of The Australia's TripAustralia is a charming country. The cultrue of this country is very wonderful. I was very happy that I can go to Australia. This trip made me excited.There were many kinds of plants

请帮我修改一篇英语作文The Feeling of The Australia's TripAustralia is a charming country. The cultrue of this country is very wonderful. I was very happy that I can go to Australia. This trip made me excited.There were many kinds of plants
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The Feeling of The Australia's Trip
Australia is a charming country. The cultrue of this country is very wonderful. I was very happy that I can go to Australia. This trip made me excited.
There were many kinds of plants andfresh air in Australia . It provided a good environment for wildlife. We can see many birds everywhere in Australia,and we can also see many bright stars in the sky at night,that was really beautiful.
When we went camping,the life is very full. We had different activities every day,even though sometimes it was tough,we can get many intererts from that and our physical ability can be trained greatly. It was an excellent chance for us to learn team spirit. The trip made me stronger in mind and learn to be independent.
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请帮我修改一篇英语作文The Feeling of The Australia's TripAustralia is a charming country. The cultrue of this country is very wonderful. I was very happy that I can go to Australia. This trip made me excited.There were many kinds of plants
The Trip to Australia
Australia is a charming country.The cultrue of this country is very wonderful.I was very happy that I could go to Australia.This trip made me excited.
There were many kinds of plants and the air is fresh in Australia .It provided a good environment for wildlife.We could see many birds everywhere in Australia,and we could also see many bright stars in the sky at night,which was really beautiful.
When we went camping,the life was very full.We had different activities every day,even though sometimes it was tough,we felt they were very intererting.Our physical ability could be trained greatly.It was an excellent chance for us to learn team spirit.The trip made me stronger in mind and I learn to be independent.

The Feeling of The Australia's Trip
Australia is a charming country. The cultrue of this country is very good. I was very happy that I can go to Australia. This trip made me excited.
There ...

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The Feeling of The Australia's Trip
Australia is a charming country. The cultrue of this country is very good. I was very happy that I can go to Australia. This trip made me excited.
There were many kinds of plants in Australia and the air were very fresh. It provided a good environment for wildlife. We can see many birds everywhere in Australia,and we also can see many bright stars in the sky at night,that was really beautiful.
When we went camping,the life is very full. We had different activities every day,even though sometimes it was tough,we can get many intererts from it and our physical ability can be trained greatly. It was an excellent chance for us to learn team spirit. The trip made me stronger in mind and learn to be independent.
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The Feeling of The Trip to Australia
Australia is a beautiful country. The cultrue of this country is very excellent. I was very happy that I could go there. It made me excited.
There are ma...

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The Feeling of The Trip to Australia
Australia is a beautiful country. The cultrue of this country is very excellent. I was very happy that I could go there. It made me excited.
There are many kinds of plants in Australia .The air there is fresh. It provids a good environment for wildlife. We can see many birds everywhere in Australia,and we can also see many bright stars at night,it was really beautiful.
When we went camping,the life is very full. We had different activities every day,even though sometimes it was tough,we can get many intererts from that and our physical ability can be trained greatly. It was an excellent chance for us to learn team spirit. The trip made me stronger in mind and learn to be independent.

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Australia is a charming country whose culture is very wonderful.I was very happy that I can go to Australia. This trip made me excited.
There are many kinds of plants in Australia and you can see ...

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Australia is a charming country whose culture is very wonderful.I was very happy that I can go to Australia. This trip made me excited.
There are many kinds of plants in Australia and you can see a lot of birds everywhere in. It provided a good environment for wildlife because of fresh air. We can also see many bright stars in the sky at night,which was really beautiful.
The life is very full when we went camping.We had different activities every day.we can get many intererts from that and our physical ability can be trained greatly,even though sometimes it was tough.It was an excellent chance for us to learn teamwork.Also,the trip made me stronger in mind and learn to be independent.

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The Feeling of The Trip to Australia
Australia is a beautiful country. The cultrue of this country is very rich. I am very happy that I could go there. It's exciting to have a journey to Austral...

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The Feeling of The Trip to Australia
Australia is a beautiful country. The cultrue of this country is very rich. I am very happy that I could go there. It's exciting to have a journey to Australia .
Australia has a charming sightseeing and clean environment.The air is sweet. There are many kinds of plants and wild animals.Various birds flying around freely is a really wonder. when at night you will see many bright stars ,it was really beautiful.
When we went camping,the life is very full. We had different activities every day,even though sometimes it was tough,but we can get interert from that and our physical ability can also be trained greatly. It was an excellent chance for us to learn team spirit. The trip made me stronger in mind and learn to be independent.
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