I've written it for you because I hope this way can be helps me find the way into your heart .求神仙鉴定语法有误否?

I've written it for you because I hope this way can be helps me find the way into your heart .求神仙鉴定语法有误否?
I've written it for you because I hope this way can be helps me find the way into your heart .求神仙鉴定语法有误否?

I've written it for you because I hope this way can be helps me find the way into your heart .求神仙鉴定语法有误否?
太错了.